Hey everyone, M-Merry Christmas haha. I'm a bit nervous about this, I rarely get much feedback so I'm sort of hoping this helps a little bit. I was hoping to have some criticism on my story, Monster Girl Chronicles. https://chyoa.com/story/Monster-Girl-Chronicles.21210 More specifically, the current ongoing story branch here: https://chyoa.com/chapter/KuliKuli,-the-Nekomata-Cat-Monster.580763 I would like to receive some feedback and remarks to hear how you feel about it, what works and what doesn't. My story writing, specifically the one for KuliKuli, is a bit of a different form of erotica. Rather than complete smut and sex, it's porn but with a silly story tacked on heh. So, I hope it entertains you guys just a little bit, even if I only get one reader that is. Thank you, I'm sorry if I'm being a bit vague. Merry Christmas everyone ❤
