I am desirous of the communities thoughts about my new story, “Red Monika, Bounty Hunter,” ( https://chyoa.com/story/sandra-s-stories/thread/red-monika-beyond-the-bounty-erotic-fiction-37c68de2 ) which is located in my compendium of stories called “Sandra's Stories.” My inspiration for choosing Red Monika as the main character was from a fellow chyoo member who loves Joe Madureira's creation (see picture) and my realization there is surprisingly little erotic fan fiction about the busty bounty hunter on the web. I mean who wouldn't love a redheaded Lara Croft with larger breasts and more of the bad girl thing. I have set several goals for myself in this story: 1) That it be a text adventure, similar to GeorgeTasker's excellent “Back To Secret Agent School," though with a less comic tone. ( https://www.literotica.com/storyxs/stories2/tasker_inter/agentschool001.shtml ) 2) I particularly liked how Tasker kept each thread short, which really encourages a text adventure feel. Thus I have imposed a strict 400 word limit for each thread. This is a challenge, but it does make for tighter writing, something I struggle with. 3) I have a general arc for the whole story in mind which will bring most threads eventually together on critical plot points. For example, all the different beginning story arcs will have Monika getting into the Overcity, but by different ways. (Note: I do love other authors' additions to my stories, so feel free to add to the story. I have a plan, but I don't want too be rigid.) 4) I would like to have an eventual conclusion to the story, as if it was a text adventure game, hence the clear and simple plot (Monika getting into the city and capturing her bounty). 5) This will mean a judicious and cautious use of the #LINKTO function. 6) I would like to have different options catering to various interests, so one could choose a BDSM, lesbian, non-consensual, romance, etc., or even a non-sexual choice for Monika to overcome various challenges. Well as usually I have rambled on. (Hence the need for a 400 word limit!) I would love to hear any thoughts, comments, suggestions and/or constructive criticisms. Thank you.
Story Notes (I decided to place my stories notes in this post rather than in the story proper.) Characters Ashelia Grand Vizier of Irylia Jentel Cartel Khan Orterres Luis Red Monika (see below) Sigjin Vox Geography Irylian Overcity (Cloud City, City Above the Clouds) Irylian Undercity Chapters (I plan to finish each chapter before moving on to the next.) Chapter #1 - Monika gets into the city. Chapter #2 - Monika finds her bounty. Chapter #3 - Monika gets her bounty. Chapter #4 - Monika returns.
