Greetings fellow pervs. I would like to request some suggestions and opinions on a story I been willing to write. Its a powerplay story about a female bodybuilder vs a male bodybuilder, the incest part isn't necessary, just another fetish I like. A mom who suffers physical abuse from her drunk husband, he gets even more violent after she asks for a divorce this is what makes her work out and learn how to fight but she also begins to hate all men. After beating her husband, she starts bodybuilding and challenging men. At some point she feels something is missing in her life, maybe a mate, maybe a challenger who can push her to the limit, but nobody seems to be capable or wort it.
Seems interesting. You seem to have a specific idea for what you want to go for, so I would imagine this would primarily be a single long branch with few decision points. In which case, you might want to outline the plot as you have it so far - break it down into "acts," give yourself time to let her develop muscle/lose fat/learn to fight over the course of a couple chapters, maybe zero in on some possible decision points - like maybe she struggles with whether or not to hate men (lesbian route) versus seeking one worthy of her (heterosexual route). My major suggestion would be to keep the weight loss/muscle gain realistic - let it take weeks and months, not minutes or days; an early branching point might involve whether or not she chooses to use steroids, which would add a drug/aggression/side effects angle.
Thanks for the feedback Zeebop , Its my first story here in Chyoa and English isn't even my first language. I cant find many stories about female bodybuilders that doesn't end with femdom, futa or lesbian so I decided to write my own. Yes, character development. I hate stories that the mc starts off with god powers, feels like lazy writing. My idea would be to develop two branches at same time, one is the female and the other the male. The male also would be into bodybuilding, but with his own motive, scars and objectives ( haven't decided on adding incest ) At some point they meet and I intend on giving a little taste of a final showdown, maybe team up in a fight or just have a arm-wrestling witch doesn't mean much in a real fight. Even though i dont like maledom and femdom i will have different endings. I am not going to give them magic, instant grow drugs or divine intervention, its going to be all natural.
