Ringmaster

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by shamefulhornytrash, Sep 21, 2020.

  1. Hi, I'm one of the three authors for the story Ringmaster. We're all rather new in Chyoa (well, I actually have had and deleted accounts on this site before, but this account is still new and I never reached much succes), yet we seem to have stumbled into writing a pretty liked story in just two weeks. I hope that if someone who's read the story find this thread, they can give us some input about what their favorite branches, chapters and characters are; what they like about the story; what they hope to see in the future, and maybe some suggestions as to how we can improve our writing!
     
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  2. wilparu

    wilparu Really Really Experienced CHYOA Backer

    Congrats on Story of the Week! That is a huge accomplishment. :)

    I like the premise and will check that story out, I see the first branch seems to imply a romantic story, or a least a romantic person. Always down for that personally.
     
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