Saint Milfer: A tale of a small well-to-do cozy community filled with hottie moms and their daughters. by dick88
This tale is like 6 months old, posted last summer, and I I've had writers block for months but since this morning bam! New threads. And I even got a contribution from another author, makes me happy. Plus I've been rewriting some threads, fixing grammar and spelling, and so on.
I used bits of your post with Ashley to keep with consistency, of the character. Of course the scene is different.
Story has great potential. Needs some editing to correct errors in almost every thread,the bold text in some of the threads needs to go, it's more of an annoyance than useful. It draws attention to itself and I found myself reading the bold before anything else. Placeholders are another thing that's not needed, to be reading an arc of threads that leads to Coming Soon is a let down when a reader thinks clicking on a catchy thread continuing title only to find no other text.
2p1k3 I've got absolutely not problem with that. Do it with as many as you may need, also I edited that particular post a little but kept it like 99% of what you intended. I understand all your concerns pervold, I see the problems too, I re-read pages as often as possible to catch my mistakes. All the threads I wrote today (1 or 2) I've omitted the bold from them right from the start as I used to. I'll limit the bold to maybe one for every three-four paragraphs at most or none at all. As for placeholders, sorry it's a habit, I'll see to it I don't do that any more, but can't do anything about the ones already there, yet. Anyway thanks for reading and or contributing you guys. P.S. Please be sure to mention any mistakes I may miss: grammar, spelling, ect.
Alright no more blank threads. Now I've got a lot of editing to do and if inspiration strikes me more threads with content.
Ok so inspiration isn't the problem lately (since my last addition in June) but time. I've been incredibly busy and just have not had the energy or the willingness to sit and type, I prefer to read or watch in my time off. So for the rest of the month I'll try to give it a go, however finishing plots/threads are years away with the current set up my personal life is at, but starting new plotline threads are most likely the new norm for the rest of the year. I may go 3 or so deep but the point is to give inspiration to other writers to pick up from there. My hope at least where this title is concerned is for others to pick up the mantle and add to the whole and I am grateful for those that have already. So here is hoping I've got new material for you, sorry in advance if it is misspelled or unintelligible in small parts. P.S. To Whom It May Concern: I've been thinking about adding pic of models to the character description section, like RicoLouis does in his stories. If there are any suggestions I'd like to hear it/see them, don't be disappointed if I don't pick yours after all there are no wrong answers they are all equally valid and true.
So I've made an effort since this weekend to put out a chapter a day. So far it's been one every other day, more or less. I'm going to try into the foreseeable future, however I'm most likely going to jump around the story tree making a thread in one spot then moving on to the next because of 'writer's block' in the sense that the creative juices stall after a bit. I'll be adding bio's for the non-family member girls sometime in the next month. And I'm going to stick with 'main character' being the only male in the universe, as this is more or less a harem piece (I plan on allowing monogamy to be a choice). And if there are any other male's mentioned they probably won't be at all important. Also the picture models for the girls may or may not happen. :/
Yup my previous goal totally failed, kinda Jinxed myself. I've added a handful of new chapters spread about. And I'll see if I can get the 'not related' girls bios worked out.
I'm currently between jobs and this benefits you since I've been dropping chapters as quickly as I can finish them. Which is in between sessions of Mass Effect Andromeda. If I don't get to the part of the story that you want continued sorry but I'm not sure how to continue that, yet. But I also want to expand the amount of choices you get to make and to a lesser extant the progression of time in story.
Also I've got two new Milfs in the works, this time actual Milfs, see if you can spot them. (You probbaly can.)
Well sadly the Milfs are on hold for a bit as I'm trying to add more choices, I prefer width to depth. What good is a '73 Chapters Deep' story when there is only one choice. This is after all 'CHYOA'. Sadly I've resorted to some 'copy/paste' chapters but only cause it seems to fit that section of the story. I've been trying my hardest to keep as many chapters unique. Sorry I can't update it more often but I work mostly off of quite solitary moments, inspiration or creativity is not an issue.
