Seminar sex

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Baumwoll, Jun 21, 2017.

  1. Baumwoll

    Baumwoll Virgin

    Heyo, I wrote "Seminar sex" https://chyoa.com/story/Seminar-sex.10863

    Would love to hear some feedback on it. Anything really. You can point out grammar or spelling mistakes, tell me if it's easy to read/understand or just tell me about some parts/chapters you liked or didn't like.

    Thanks in advance!
     
  2. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    It looks top flight, but work on expanding all branches...