This is the thread to comment on Stoned my story for the Infinity Gems. Wondering if you like pages and which ones. If you dislike a story, can you constructively tell me why? No, 'It Sucks'. More 'It sucks and here's why...' Or 'It sucks and here's how to fix it'. Thanks. So here is a link to the story... https://chyoa.com/story/Stoned.8809 Enjoy and help along.
Not sure if I can improve it now, but if you have a suggestion, feel free to give it. I will give it consideration. Any line you enjoy?
Honestly, I think I might not be your target audience, I'm not into non-con and see mind control as non-con... Also, not a big fan of comic books, expecialy the DC and Marvel universes.
