Story ideas : A dept to paid for

Discussion in 'Story Ideas' started by talesofswamppoint, Aug 9, 2019.

  1. Here a story idea that been on my mind for a few days now. It is loosely based on game found on tg game site the debt. https://tfgames.site/index.php?module=viewgame&id=1836
    It would be a story where a young man is captured for a dept from one of his family. He his sent to a facility where he will be forced in a brothel to pay for the debt.
    The brothel normally only employed women so he his body slowly change to go with the facility standard.
    It can be seen like a pretty standard story but with the game mode on the site it could be fun to write with a lots of branches where the body of the protagonist could change differently from one branch to other depending of his choices.
    I would like to write it but I'm not sure I'm versed enough with all the possibility of the game mode can do. If anybody would like to help or have suggestion or want to write I gladly read them and help them.
     
    Last edited: Aug 10, 2019
  2. *debt, by the way
     
  3. gene.sis

    gene.sis CHYOA Guru

    From an economic point of view, that might be questionable.
    Why would you put a guy into a brothel for straight guys and bend his body until he half-assedly looks like a girl if you could put him into a brothel for gays and just slightly modify his body to make MORE money? (I know that most users wouldn't care a fuck about that.)

    So I would rather expect a brothel which is specialized in that kind of feminization.

    Another option would be that he was mistaken as a girl in the first place. The error might become apparent as soon as he arrives at the facility. Once there, they could decide that he has to work off his debt anyway and assign him to work at the bar with the restriction that he has to look like a girl. After a few days, he realizes that he doesn't earn enough to even pay the interest. He complains about that at the manager who reluctantly offers him to work at the glory hole.


    With the current possibilities of Game Mode, it could be difficult but should be possible to do.
    There will be restrictions with calculating the interest. Instead of a percentage, it must be a fixed value. I might also work better if it increases over time instead of getting lower.
    (I'm not into feminization but might help setting up Game Mode.)