Surviving Slavery by Hvast

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  1. 2p1k3

    2p1k3 Experienced

    Surviving Slavery by Hvast
    Amazon fell in the hands of slavers. What her fate will be?

    Sandra never expected that her life will change in a such dramatic way. Two weeks after her eighteen birthday she was on a routine scouting mission and then an arrow hit her ankle. It was an arrow coated with a sleeping poison. It was a crafty ambush made by a group of slavers. She awoke in a wagon and spent more than two weeks there with no chance to escape...

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    The forum appeared absent a thread for this story so thus I created one. Primarily to convey a preliminary idea for a stitch I just submitted.

    Liquid Granite

    The hyperlink basically explains my source for the idea of 'creating' granite through chemistry... which is really alchemy... which I guess was Khemitology and comes from Kemit {Egypt}. As we can now do it, some evidence suggests reeeaaalllyyy ancient Egyptians could create it too.

    The village is kind of like Vehumet's with similar purpose but different town and people... or it could be Vehumet I guess, if Hvast wants that tie-in. Sagotb is using what our world may call science instead of "the Force" or some other word for aether or prana.

    Basically only the outer wall and Consul's 'house' is made of the material at the moment. The rest of the village is made of typical wood and leather huts. The wall covers an area much larger than what the village currently utilizes, Consul had a moment of forward thinking.... unlike most Castles I have ever seen a picture of.

    For some reason, they thought it is a great idea to build a wall right at the 'current' edge of town... London's never going to get bigger right? Evidently history books or even journals/diaries were scarce.
     
  2. Hvast

    Hvast Really Really Experienced

    I Should check forums before the main site :)

    This story is not in the same universe as "Goblin". While I may borrow some ideas - Amazons, orcs, half-orcs, goblins are already different to ones you can see in "Goblin" The difference will only grow larger

    As for the other stuff. I don't want to bring other settlements and complex magic\religious systems until story will grow much larger