Sweet Dreams...

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by LoversOfLewdness, Jan 12, 2021.

  1. Hello, everybody.

    I feel a bit weird doing this, but I've really been into writing my own stories lately. I've started posting on CHYOA myself, and I have to admit I'm quite fond of it! Really enjoyed writing my second story so far on here, but I wanted to see if there would be any feedback. It's a simple concept where a man goes into a dreamworld after having an accident and gets involved in a bunch of smutty adventures. A collection of fanfiction, essentially - since I have quite a few ideas but didn't want to create a completely new page for every single one of them.

    Stories so far:

    Archer - multiple short stories based around a new agent arriving to ISIS.
    • A stealth mission with Lana Kane.
    • The Archer brothers visit Lana's parents...
    • Pam and Cheryl shenanigans!
    • (Coming soon: Katya's DP origin story!)
    Avatar: The Last Airbender - so far, the longest story on the thread. A smutty 18+ version of ATLA.

    A post-apocalyptic world - could be different fandoms.
    • The Walking Dead: Carl is on the run with his parents...
    • (Might be adding more soon, also probably will write something based around Z-Nation!)
    The Seven Deadly Sins/Nanatsu no Taizai - short stories based around the anime.
    • The owner of a bar, and the 'Rust Knight'... - Elizabeth x Meliodas
    The real world!
    • The women in my life... - story about a man that catches his daughter and girlfriend one day, changing his complete life for the better.

    I'll link it below!

    https://chyoa.com/story/Sweet-Dreams.33226

    Now, any feedback is welcome. English isn't my native language so feel free to point out any major errors, or just if/how you enjoy the story yourself. I don't work with a lot of conditions for this story but there are a few so if there's any feedback on those, it's very welcome too! Probably going to work on something that utilizes the feature of variables and stuff as it seems like it could be really interesting to write out some kind of game, but anyhow.

    Thanks in advance, and I hope you have a wonderful day.

    Side note: I always end up writing a lot of group sex in my stories for some reason. I like it that way!
     
    Last edited: Feb 27, 2021
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  2. Added the first story based on The Seven Deadly Sins, which I've started watching recently. Been loving it so far and got the urge to write some basic Meliodas x Elizabeth smut based around the very beginning of the show. More to come, probably!

    (It's also one of the very first animes I've decided to watch for some reason, so feel free to throw any recommendations in my direction!)
     
  3. daciasdesire

    daciasdesire Really Experienced

    I'm a huge fan of Archer and always thought it was the perfect setting for some really sexy Fan Fic. I never wrote it myself as I didn't think I could do one of my favourite cartoons justice. I'll definitely be bookmarking your story to read at a later time.
     
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  4. Same here! I do hope I did it justice in a way. :p
     
  5. Also added one of my old stories to the thread because I might revive it and keep writing if I feel like it. Heavily focused on incest!
     
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