The adventures of Ultra Boy

Hi everybody:

I am actually written a story about this character ( https://chyoa.com/story/the-adventures-of-ultra-boy ). I would like your opinión about the story, things you like or not about that, details you would like to read on it, narrative style....such a kind of things. I would appreciate it. Thanks in advance.

MrCaliban2

 

You'll want to review the New Chyoo Guide for at least one point in Ultra Boy's description. https://chyoa.com/story/chyoo-guide/thread/172581

 

Thanks. I understand about you are talking about.