The Bet (2)

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Simon_Silver, Nov 30, 2015.

  1. Simon_Silver

    Simon_Silver Guest

    This story by airwreck showed such promise, such inspiration, such genius! I was all set to branch off the redhead thread with a nifty idea! And...

    It's in private mode.

    WHYYYYYY!?!?!?!

    I mean, just for starters: you forgot something! There is a fourth 'tribe' to contend in this race: the Ravens! Black haired girls can 'fight' for the honor of their hair color too: and we happen to have someone who almost certainly has that hair color in the tale right off: the Chinese girl! OK, so SHE can't compete, her parents would cut her off, but you KNOW she has a slutty friend or two who can join the games as the 'dark horse' contender! (Pardon the Pun)

    Also: and I almost left this in the comments, 'Lowering her standards?' I think Val has that bit of information BACKWARDS: it is THEY who would be 'lowering their standards' to sleep with HER! (airwreck knows what I am talking about!)

    Lastly here is a link to the story in question:

    http://chyoa.com/story/the-bet-2
     
  2. airwreck

    airwreck Really Experienced

    This story is based on the premise of remfan55's "A bet: Blonde, brunette or redhead?"

    I have no problem expanding to include other girls.

    I kept it private for now to set the foundation first.