The Big Boobs Tales

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by BoobsFetishWriter, Nov 19, 2018.

  1. Hello, guys, I'm the author of "The Big Boobs Tales". Many people have added it to favorites, but I haven't received comments or collaborations. I liked to know what you think about the story. Suggestions are welcome, too!
     
  2. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Well, it's new. Give it a little bit of time. Also, best to include a link: https://chyoa.com/story/The-Big-Boobs-Tales.18672

    While I like the illustrations, I admit the formatting you've chose is a bit off-putting. Instead of hyphens to designate dialogue, quotation marks would be nice.
     
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  3. Thank you for your attention, Zeebop! And thanks for the tip - I'm going to change the format soon.