Hello, guys, I'm the author of "The Big Boobs Tales". Many people have added it to favorites, but I haven't received comments or collaborations. I liked to know what you think about the story. Suggestions are welcome, too!
Well, it's new. Give it a little bit of time. Also, best to include a link: https://chyoa.com/story/The-Big-Boobs-Tales.18672 While I like the illustrations, I admit the formatting you've chose is a bit off-putting. Instead of hyphens to designate dialogue, quotation marks would be nice.