The Bridal Boutique

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Zekar, Nov 14, 2016.

  1. Zekar

    Zekar Really Experienced

    The Bridal Boutique

    This is for posting any feedback or comments about The Bridal Boutique story.

    This story is open to additions in any of the branches from other contributors.
     
  2. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    This story espouses rape and Non-con: you are perverting what should be the ultimate joy into a hideous abomination.
     
  3. Zekar

    Zekar Really Experienced

    It’s tagged as Mind Control. I recommend making a new story that is less Non-Con.

    If you do post back here with the link. I’m willing to collaborate within the guidelines you suggest.