The Flesh Artist

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Loserhusband, Jun 5, 2024.

  1. Loserhusband

    Loserhusband Virgin

    Thanks everyone who had expressed interest or given me feeback.

    This is my first story on here. It was actually originally a linear story, and when I got to the end, and the ending was perfect, I still wanted to explore other things, and realized that this could make a greats choose-your-own-adventure, and actually has the feel of one of those old books, albeit, with smut.

    If anyone has ideas, or other feedback, please let me know. If anyone wants to add a chapter or a whole plot thread, please feel free. Other authors can add what they want.

    I've still got a good bit left of the original story, and once I'm done with that, will continue to add sudden death turns as well as substantial alternate plotlines.

    Thanks again!