Thanks everyone who had expressed interest or given me feeback. This is my first story on here. It was actually originally a linear story, and when I got to the end, and the ending was perfect, I still wanted to explore other things, and realized that this could make a greats choose-your-own-adventure, and actually has the feel of one of those old books, albeit, with smut. If anyone has ideas, or other feedback, please let me know. If anyone wants to add a chapter or a whole plot thread, please feel free. Other authors can add what they want. I've still got a good bit left of the original story, and once I'm done with that, will continue to add sudden death turns as well as substantial alternate plotlines. Thanks again!