The Fuckbot Diaries

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by filthy_natasha, Mar 12, 2021.

  1. I just published the first chapter in my erotic ripoff - um, homage - to The Murderbot Diaries, which I just discovered and LOVE. This is a departure for me, as usually my stuff is ridiculously pornographic. If you're not familiar with Murderbot, it's science fiction told from the perspective of an android (well, constructed from organic material and tech) who is sarcastic, disaffected, and quite funny.

    Would love some feedback! :)

    https://chyoa.com/story/The-Fuckbot-Diaries.34815
     
    Last edited: Mar 12, 2021
  2. i like it. Would like to see it used as relief for those with tendencies towards depravity or rough fantasies.
     
  3. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    It's definitely a start. Instead of "What's Next?" you might consider changing the question to suggest a direction the story could go - like "How does he want to fuck her?" or something like that.