The Lustful Device

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by mindtheMILF, Apr 19, 2017.

  1. mindtheMILF

    mindtheMILF Guest

    The Lustful Device

    The Alien world of Gyra is full of steampunk devices to satisfy your wildest imagination. The Airship Outlander and it's rough pirate crew travel in search of a device that could give them untold power. Full of Aliens, a bit of incest, and choke full of Steampunk Erotica!

    While I have only released last week and only been able to type up a handful of chapters I still wanted to get some feedback in the forums for those who have read it, but have not commented, or may not have noticed it yet.

    I am a new writer and hoping to get some more suggestions on how to direct this story.
     
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  2. Loeman

    Loeman Really Really Experienced

    It's really hard to get comments, or direction.

    I know for a fact that if I updated some of my more mainstream stories, rather than the one I'm working on, I'd more easily get feedback and hits.

    If you like your writing... If you're good...

    Advertising helps. Posting here helps. But often, not that much.

    Personally, I like that you have niche you're interested in. I think its good, and good for the site. Unfortunately, it can make it difficult to connect with people, but if your stuff is well written the people that like your niche will appreciate it all the more for its rarity.
     
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