Hello. I am a fairly new writer though I have written more of late than usual. Anyway I was hoping to ask you to check out my story The Mall. While also feeling free to suggest possible ways the story might go from here. I would love to have a true choose your own adventure where people take over a possibility. But I know thats unlikely as author's like writing their own stories. So anyway feel free to check out the story and suggest where things with my characters might go from here. best Natalie16
Hi, I just wanted to ask you something: Malls Are Big Places, especially ones like the one you depict: would you be willing to have there be another sub-plot happening in a bunch of stores at the other end of the mall? I've got a whole bunch of ideas for other characters in my head, but I wanted to see if you would mind before I just started throwing everything out there...
Not at all! I am actually at a crossroads a bit with where I am right now. Having an idea of where to go and not sure people will like it or not. But thats why Id love other writers if they so chose, to go with it another way. A subplot and new characters is also fine by me. Maybe the characters could pop in on one another at times. Think would be great.
Well, they're both happening in the same mall with only one movie theater, so I'd be surprised if they didn't...
Just check the story, I hit 'save as draft' so it should appear at the bottom of the first page for you...
