The Monster Cock Nerd

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Semprini, Mar 27, 2017.

  1. Semprini

    Semprini Virgin

    Hello everyone.

    I hope everyone is enjoying my silly story.

    https://chyoa.com/story/The-Monster-Cock-Nerd.10126

    If you haven't read it, here is a brief summary:

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    Any feedback on this is appreciated. Including the bad stuff. Please kick my ass.

    Also suggestions are welcome. I feel like I lost any sense of normalcy pretty quick so basically anything that isn't nasty is possible.
     
    Semprini, Mar 27, 2017
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  2. TheDespaxas

    TheDespaxas Really Really Experienced

    Haven't read the story yet but this picture is so cute I had to comment.
     
    TheDespaxas, Mar 28, 2017
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  3. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    I'm so SAD I had a guinea pig just like that when I was a kid, and he loved bananas too!
     
    Nemo of Utopia, Mar 28, 2017
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