So I've done a few ENF stories in the past but never in a CHYOA, but I decided to try my hand at a SPH story this time because I'm all for equal opportunities in my fetish. So I decided to try my hand at expanding a chapter this Madman777 dude wrote a few months ago, and I would really appreciate some feedback. https://chyoa.com/chapter/Naruto.348802 My stuff starts after this first chapter. Just a fair bit of warning, I went kind of heavy with cuckoldry at some points, so just be warned of that if that isn't your thing.
Your chapters looked good to me! I did want to say, not so much as feedback but as a warning, that I have found SPH stuff to be a real flashpoint among my readers. Of the different taboos and fetishes I play with this is the one by far the most likely to spark up negative comments and PMs. This one kink seems to spark something in a lot of readers to the point of having to say something about it. Your thread is in a story that is well labeled (SPH being right in the title) so you probably don't have much to worry about, but I thought I would give you a friendly warning. Oh...and welcome to CHYOA!
