The New Housemate's Secret.

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Bauer1, Dec 9, 2014.

  1. Bauer1

    Bauer1 Virgin CHYOA Backer

    I know that the story has been going on for a while, but i would like to know what you guys think, and what you would like to see included into the story. New additions/ ideas welcome.
     
  2. GateKeeper_A

    GateKeeper_A Really Experienced

    Been enjoying this story for a long time. Its been a lot of fun watching this story grow over time.

    As for what I'd like to see added to the story? I'm always excited to see more content, but I'd particularly enjoy seeing more content down the "Hermaphrodite" path.
     
  3. Bauer1

    Bauer1 Virgin CHYOA Backer

    Ive been fighting a bit of writer's block at the moment, and forcing myself to write a thread where they go to meet her parents. With it being POV'S first time to meet any members of her family. From there i am planning her old friend/ lover Katie to be there too. Saucy shenanigans will occur ;)
     
  4. Bauer1

    Bauer1 Virgin CHYOA Backer

    Thanks for the kind feedback too :)
     
  5. ddf_21s

    ddf_21s Virgin

    Awesome story.
    I was reading it for a while, until I was outrun :)
    I would like to see some expansion of shemale path
     
  6. jonray

    jonray Experienced

    Would definitely love to see them meet their families, sorry I haven't been back for a bit, crap happens in RL, loving the story and those 2 crazy pair of Kids, Awesome story as always!

    Oh Shit! Forgot to mention my hope is that Rachel has a baby or lots of babies to John!!! Crossing fingers!

    Crap! Forgot to add, how John's Friends react to the news and also possibly finding out about Rachel, also how John's Family handle it as well, the news or and finding out about Rachel. Dang! It's Gunna be a interesting 2015!!!
     
    Last edited: Jan 4, 2015
  7. Bauer1

    Bauer1 Virgin CHYOA Backer

    Hi Jonray! Long time no see! Most of my writing has been on my phone, so I don't use the PC, or see the Forum.

    I'm wrapping up the visit to Rachel's parents, and will be moving onto their romantic weekend away. Afterwards the next stage will involve Katie, and possibly Amy further down the line.