Hi everyone, I'm wondering what you think of my new story. The old manor in Swamp-Point. https://chyoa.com/story/The-old-manor-in-Swamp-Point.16402 Keep in mind that English is not my native language but I think my writing is improving since my first story. If anyone wants to write a part feel free to do so. I wrote the introduction for the three main characters, Jonathan, Kim, and Sonia. Which one do you want me to explore first? I'm intended to create another character in the future the witch apprentice, but not now.