Greetings, all. I hope everyone who has read my first story here on CHYOA has enjoyed it. I realize for an erotic story, it has some pretty serious themes, and not a lot of sex, pound for pound. I've set this up to provide readers with a way to voice concerns, corrections, likes, dislikes, and desires. The central theme of this story is transformation and redemption; the secondary theme is that even monsters can be saved in the right circumstances. As I mention in the introduction, I write this story stream-of-consciousness, as therapy. I hope all readers are able to find something or someone they like. Link: https://chyoa.com/story/The-Phoenix.35875
Hi there, welcome to the Chyoa Forums! You should put a link to your story if you want any real feedback.
