The Reno Fantasy Ranch

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by hematoma, Jan 19, 2016.

  1. hematoma

    hematoma Really Experienced

    I just posted a new story entitled "The Reno Fantasy Ranch" about Clarabelle Chastain, an eighteen year old who moves to Reno and has to get a job at a brothel.

    Her father dies and her happy life falls apart so she has to move in with her estranged mother and her estranged mother's husband in Reno. The opening is a little bit of a moral play on the bus ride to Reno. I've left some options open and will probably add to that part more, but that amounts to a prologue for her arrival in Reno.

    The story will featuring some pseudo-incest themes with the stepdad, as well as lots of hot sex at the brothel. Will Clarabelle become a waitress? A whore like her mom? Will she refuse to work there and seduce her stepdad?

    I liked the idea of doing a period story (1975, so before my time :p) and I wanted to do something more like my A Sexy Day in Suburbia story, with no monsters or demons. Something with a teenage protagonist and a fairly sex-positive attitude.

    I'd love to get some feedback and love to have people contributing, even if it's just posting some ideas.
     
  2. Zingiber

    Zingiber Really Really Experienced

    1975 is about the time when the Sandstone Retreat (nudist, sex-positive intentional community) near Malibu had its waning days after the founders moved on, but was still notorious and attracting famous guests. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sandstone_Retreat -- a long way from Reno, but maybe close enough to be in the newspapers or something. If she's from Los Angeles, she might conceivably know about them, especially if her dad had some connection.
     
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  3. hematoma

    hematoma Really Experienced

    Interesting! I'll read up on it! I was reading about some of the mid-70s brothels, many of them infamous and operating in a legal gray area that often changed from legal to illegal and back again in a matter of months. Wild times. I wasn't alive in the 1970s, but based on all the movies and the fact that it was a pre-HIV time in America coming out of the swinging 60s, it really was the height of American sleaze. Love it.