Ahoy! As you might have noticed I'm the author to "The Rich Streak" and here be the thread for the thingy I'm writing for your reading pleasure. A few point before the larger discussion begins: I'm new to the forum. I've been reading the fiction but haven't really found a need to discuss anything about it. So hi! I'm new to erotic fiction, but I've got some writing credentials under my belt, including some IF writing. Mainly unpublished works lying on my hard drive, but that's true for anyone dabbling in writing I suppose. I know storytelling, I also know there's plenty of improving to do on the threads I have already written. Constructive criticism is absolutely awesome and I'm happy to hear any that you've got for me. I'm always open to ideas! If you've got ideas on paths you want me to write, scenes you think would fit in there somewhere or want to help out by expanding the story, just send me some kind of message. I don't bite. My erotic experiences are limited to very few women because I've been in a committed relationship for almost my entire adult life. I'm sure there's stuff to improve in how I write the sex scenes and detail stuff or even just what words I use where. I expect you fine folks to point out what I can do to make the reading process more fluid for you! The floor is open. Mind the sticky bits.
