Hey all, I started this story because it was a fantasy I'd wanted to read and I couldn't find it anywhere. Now that I've written a good chunk of it, I find myself worried that it's going to get repetitive or be too sex-driven (is too 'sex-driven' a ridiculous concern on an erotic fiction site?). I'm curious if anyone has any requests of places they'd like to see the story go. If you have complex ideas you could post them here, or if you have ideas for choices you'd like to see the character make, you could just post those ideas as comments on the appropriate chapter. That would be super helpful for me! I write best when I'm writing something I know someone wants to see- so if y'all throw some story options you'd be curious about, it might fuel my inspiration to write! Thanks for your support! The story link: https://chyoa.com/story/The-Sex-Ed-Model.24796
Not at all. Porn without plot tends to run thin pretty quickly, and the sex chapters work best when you have an actual emotional investment in the characters and what they're doing. One thing you could think about, pursuant to that, is to develop on how the characters get along after sex ed is done. Do they have a reputation? Did they form an emotional connection? Did they like displaying their body (which could lead to streaking, flashing, web cam, or just not wearing underwear)? Were they so good at it that they were asked to help "tutor" a student after school? Does the guidance counselor encourage them to do this professionally? Are their parents supportive?
Oh, I like it! I'd mostly been limiting myself to what happens in the classroom, but you're right, if I open it up to a story afterwards, there are new possibilities for character growth. Thanks!
