The Shining Stone

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by GenocideHeart, Jul 16, 2014.

  1. GenocideHeart

    GenocideHeart Virgin

    Maybe it's inappropriate to gush, but I really love this story. It was written by Hematoma, who has consistently put out quality work, and it actually felt like a choose-your-own-adventure story, what with the bad endings left and right, and a story that actually felt like it was going somewhere. The fact that I'm a major fan of Fantasy adds tremendously to that fact.

    If it wasn't for this story, I wouldn't have written anything for CHYOO at all. So even though I've never really spoken to Hematoma directly, I just wanted to thank him (or her) for letting me submit my threads to their story and I hope that I did it some justice.
     
  2. jealco

    jealco Experienced

    He wrote a masterpiece. All the contributing authors have done a good job, too. I haven't found myself bored reading it yet.

    I keep wanting to write a few threads in a couple of Melena's arcs, but I get a hellacious dose of writer's block. Hopefully the words come soon.
     
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  3. Torg

    Torg Really Experienced

    I also love this story.
     
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  4. Zingiber

    Zingiber Really Really Experienced

    And because I can't stand not posting a link to the story -- it feels positively like a tease to me when people don't -- here it is.

    The Shining Stone by hematoma
     
  5. spentbob

    spentbob Experienced

    I've always loved this one too, but have never felt able to write anything worthy of it! A wonderful work and one of my favorites, though.
     
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  6. dick88

    dick88 Experienced

    The first few times I read it didn't do it justice, but I am truly impressed by the level of cooperation and depth to the story. 5 stars.
     
  7. Torg

    Torg Really Experienced

    I love writing for this story too. It forces me to be more literary, less stroke.
     
  8. hematoma

    hematoma Really Experienced

    Awww you guys are so sweet! I love the stuff you added to that story, GenocideHeart and everybody else. It has a lot of great contributors and it belongs to everyone who has written for it. I have been writing chyoa stuff for ages, since before I really should have been (shhh) and I feel like it has shaped my dirty mind so much that when I read a regular book I wish it had a branching plot and raunchy bad endings. When the old site migrated to this new one (which is great!) I hesitated and thought maybe I'm too busy to get back into doing this stuff, but I couldn't resist. Hopefully I get the chance after the holidays to fix some of the broken links in Shining Stone.

    BTW I am a she :p
     
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  9. Torg

    Torg Really Experienced

    It's great to hear from you, hematoma.