The tower of Kama

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by 12inpen, Nov 5, 2018.

  1. 12inpen

    12inpen Virgin

    Hello everyone. Looking for input on my new story, The tower of Kama. Also, looking for ideas. Let me know what you think. It is still a work in progress but the ground work is mostly done.
     
  2. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Well, you've got the start of something, but it's too soon to say how much interest there is for it - no real sex yet, no real consequences for actions. I'll be interested to see where you go with it from here, but as far as suggestions go...

    - Secret Section In The Library
    - Steal Mrs. Parks' Lunch to reduce hunger (bad consequence)
    - Drink a potion to relieve thirst (become a girl?)
     
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  3. 12inpen

    12inpen Virgin

    Thanks for the suggestions. I'm building out the beginning and will include at least a few of these.

    Edited to add:
    I have added a 'secret section' to the library. Have fun searching for it.
    I have added a scene where you can steal from Mrs. Parks. It's not her lunch but something just as valuable. Have fun find how to do it.
     
    Last edited: Nov 7, 2018
  4. 12inpen

    12inpen Virgin

    Updated: The introduction portion is now 90% done. There is room to add more in the future. I put spoiler tags on all the chapters so you have to be playing the game to read them. I also added and Author's section. Where I will be adding additional functionality. to make it easier on Authors and myself.
     
  5. 12inpen

    12inpen Virgin

    Updated: The introduction portion is now 100% done. Moving onto working on the tower now. There is still room to add more in the introduction portion. I added functionality to the Author's section that allows Author's to view other Author's notes.
     
  6. 12inpen

    12inpen Virgin

    Updated: The initial chain for the first room is nearly done. Next up would be filling out the options.

    Edit: Chain to first room is now done. I am now working on that being your Base of sorts. After that comes fleshing out the story leading up to that and sorting out the paths.
     
    Last edited: Nov 9, 2018
  7. RejectTed

    RejectTed Really Experienced

    Sorry to get off topic, but what are spoiler tags?