Hello, I'm new and have started my first story. I'm using variables and conditional loops quite rigorously. For branching options to return to the story, as well as variables to control events. I would love criticisms and suggestions. For 'debugging' I've left the variable view able if you hit play game. Thank you
Word choices are hella awkward, but it's a solid foundation, got me hard. Work on your style and grammar and you've got something.
