Hi everyone, I'm looking for some advice, tips, suggestion, and feedback on my story, the old manor in swamp-point revisited. https://chyoa.com/story/The-old-Manor-in-Swamp-Point-Revisited.32402 I know my English is very far from being perfect, but I think since my first story I perfect it a bit, but there's a long way ahead. The next few chapters I will write will probably go towards a few bad ends. If some writers are interested to put some pictures in those bad ends chapters, I will gladly incorporate them. MY story is open to any writers who want to participate and write a few chapters or branches in the story.
