Title poll for new story.

Discussion in 'Authors' Hangout' started by TheDespaxas, Mar 16, 2017.

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What does sound the best?

  1. A Scion's Ascension

    1 vote(s)
    20.0%
  2. Dark lord's rising

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  3. Chaos Rising

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  4. Other : propose title in the thread.

    0 vote(s)
    0.0%
  5. Dark Lord Rising [GAME]

    4 vote(s)
    80.0%
  1. TheDespaxas

    TheDespaxas Really Really Experienced

    Hi I spent the last weeks knitting a spiderweb of chapters on a new story.

    First attempt at game mode and it sure is harder than to just churn out chapters.

    The story without spoilers beyond the first chapter and description, is about a mage descended (far removed) from a God of Chaos and Mischief. Expelled from the Academy he goes on a trip that will end with him becoming a typical Lord of darkness (overlord/sauron...).

    The original title was crappy and was scratched for "Dark lord's rising ". With publication getting closer I'm less sure about the title.

    An other point is, should I add [GAME] after the title whichever title I choose?

    I Need a few more day to get it good enough to go live and I'll check the results of the poll before deciding.
     
  2. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    Yes, add [Game] and my Suggestion is Dark Lord Rising with first letters capitalized as it's going to be a proper noun, like the title of a book.
     
  3. TheDespaxas

    TheDespaxas Really Really Experienced

    I considered it but I wasn't sure if it was grammatically correct, some subtleties that are sometimes lost on non native English speakers like me.

    The more I think about it, the more I am sure I'll add the [GAME], I gave up hope on making the story readable or coherent for those that don't use game mode. It would double my work.
     
  4. moonblack

    moonblack CHYOA Guru

    I support Nemo's suggestion about a title.

    And good idea about the [Game] tag - I think I'll use it for my Game story.
     
  5. TheDespaxas

    TheDespaxas Really Really Experienced

    It is now one of the choices on the poll and you can change your vote to it if you want.

    It's tied for me with the first choice, I liked the alliteration in it.
     
  6. RicoLouis

    RicoLouis Really Really Experienced

    "How I went from Acolyte to dark lord in sixty-nine easy steps."
     
  7. dingsdongs

    dingsdongs Really Really Experienced

    That could be the subtitle :)
     
  8. TheDespaxas

    TheDespaxas Really Really Experienced

    Current subtitle is "even overlords have to start somewhere." but I don't mind suggestions (would be a tad hypocritical on a suggestion threat I started myself.)
     
  9. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    I agree with the new Subtitle idea proposed by Rico and modified by Dingdongs...
     
  10. TheDespaxas

    TheDespaxas Really Really Experienced

    I find it good and funny but I'm not sure it will fit the tone of his story.
     
  11. TheDespaxas

    TheDespaxas Really Really Experienced

    THe story has been sent in review.

    I set the title with Dark Lord Rising [GAME] and kept A Scion's Ascension as subtitle (might change later)
     
  12. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    Cool, I look forward to reading it...
     
  13. TheDespaxas

    TheDespaxas Really Really Experienced