Hello, I don't usually do this but I really want to work on improving my story and thought this would best way to get some direct feedback. 'Trapped in a romance novel but I am the villainess!' - https://chyoa.com/story/Trapped-in-a-romance-novel-but-I-am-the-villainess!.35374 I haven't received much if any feedback on it. Basically, if you're free do you mind telling me what you liked/dislike about the story so far? Thank you!
