Two ideas I have... mind control

Discussion in 'Story Ideas' started by Zekar, Dec 18, 2016.

  1. Zekar

    Zekar Really Experienced

    I've got a couple ideas I dreamt up last night. Not Having mind Control.

    Wife of Many roles tribute(Please read to get an idea I don't like spoiling):
    The plot is very generic remote control wife, but I like the idea of a company that reprograms wives. In particular the story has a couple of twists that I feel would carry over well into an interactive story

    MMO Brainwash Game:
    This came from a real dream I had where people who played this "MMO" but it could be any video game get trapped inside and brainwashed into a role. The original dream started with a woman being hired to beta test a new game. As she played as a spy she would be require to take on different tactics. For instance pretending to be a maid or party guest. Eventually as she completed each level she would be molded into what she "trained" as.

    What do you think? Which sounds better?
     
  2. Funatic

    Funatic Really Really Experienced

    I don't like the reprogamming wife stuff in general so i am very biased (Putting that out there in advance)

    However I don't exactly get the MMO Thing completly. Let my try to understand though. So this this woman will start at a company. The company will send her into a Virtual Reality of some description and than she will be controlled by someone else? Or will she be the player? After she solves whatever quest she has gotten the memories are imprinted in her psyche and mold her Animus(Assassin's Creed) Style and she changes character/gains skills.

    I don't get what about that would be an MMO. Are all the party guests Players? Does it matter to the story? When she is molded will these changes persist or is it an inside the game only thing?

    Need more Data please D:
     
  3. bastardlydastard

    bastardlydastard Really Experienced

    For my two cents, I would go with the MMO. Though I agree with Funatic about needing more info, From what you have posted the concept is pretty unique, and it would be interesting to see how it is realized in writing.