U.S.S. Ishtar: A STAR TREK story

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Nemo of Utopia, Nov 24, 2016.

  1. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    Having gone through the entire archive and found on thread for our current 'Story of the Week' I decided to make one.

    Now I cannot speak for the other approved authors but for me, from the 'Imperium' SL, I've hit a snag.

    Happens to the best of us.

    I just can't seem to get back into Ensign Trask's headspace to write about how she gets roped into/creates the C-Deck militia, and that's what I need to write next.

    https://chyoa.com/story/U-S-S--Ishtar.999

    There's the link it you want to take a look!
     
  2. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    And now I'm stuck on my interpretation of Minya's SL, and would like some feedback.

    The Story I'm working on consists of the following chapters:

    https://chyoa.com/chapter/Introduction.12689

    https://chyoa.com/chapter/Minya.12693

    https://chyoa.com/chapter/A-private-conversation-with-the-Captain.12868

    https://chyoa.com/chapter/"Minya,-No:-I-Just-Can't-".389135

    https://chyoa.com/chapter/"Are-You-Sure-About-That-".403584

    What do people think they want to see next from this story? Should Mary 'ask', or no? (Whichever option reaches three votes first is the one I write: but if the other option then reaches five votes I'll do that one TOO.)
     
  3. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    Well, a sex therapist might be handy in some team-building exercises with the militia...