Umbrella Drinks ...at a bottomless resort

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  1. Zingiber

    Zingiber Really Really Experienced

    In honour of @daciasdesire adding new energy to the setting I never got going with, I hereby revive:

    https://chyoa.com/story/Umbrella-Drinks.5783

    Women friends go on vacation for sun, tropical drinks, and the wind on their bare bottoms.

    The three women were gathered in a shady nook beside one of the resort's swimming pools. An artificial cascade splashed down on the other side of the pool. They wore sun visors, bright tropical blouses and flip-flop sandals, but were otherwise bare below the waist. Their figures had softened in the years since they'd first met, the pale redhead and the dark-skinned woman showing a little belly, but they all radiated confidence in their beauty.

    Meg looked over at Lana's smooth brown belly. "How long have you been shaving?" she asked. Meg and Laura each had a bush matching her hair color. Meg's red bush looked natural, while Laura's blonde one was trimmed round the edges and full over her mound.​

    Meg: Redhead with a short cap hairstyle, her husband Jim is visiting his old friends at the "free love" house share that Meg pried him out of. They've promised to tell each other the best parts when they see each other again. Perhaps a little shy and slow to get into the swing of things.

    Laura: A tall blonde with a golden bush, all she told her husband was that this was a girls' trip planned after the five friends met up together at a reunion. Takes the lead a little more than Meg. May have married for money or ambition.

    Lana: A divorcée, a Black woman with a side-buzzed naturally curly hairstyle, who left her conventional marriage-and-kids life and now lives happily with a younger female partner, Terry Lou, who is off at a women's music festival, probably someplace rustic and uncomfortable and without umbrella drinks. Waxed smooth.

    On Terry Lou:

    "She looked nice in that suit at the reunion," Laura said. "Is that the way she usually dresses up?"

    "Uh-huh. Dresses aren't really her thing. Jeans and a jacket. Finally got her to let go of her flannel shirts and step it up a little," Lana said.​

    Two friends still on their way:

    "I missed you all so much," Meg said. "When are Diane and Rachel coming?"

    "Afternoon," Lana said.

    "What do we do till then?" Meg asked.​

    Diane and Rachel complete the fivesome, and haven't been described beyond their names.

    "Would you do my legs too, Meg?" Laura asked. "Like you used to?"

    "Sure, roomie," Meg said. Meg and Laura had met as dormitory roommates before connecting with Lana, Diane, and Rachel. Meg filled her palms with lotion and smoothed it onto Laura's bare legs, hips, and belly. "Turn over, now." Meg completed her job on Laura's naked buttocks. "You have a nice start on a summer tan, Laura."​

    The initiating event was an in-person reunion, most likely college, but perhaps a company they all worked for at the same time -- and they were close enough then that they may have seen seen each other bottomless before, and close enough now that they thought the resort was a great idea, or that it didn't matter, they were going to be there for their friends.
     
  2. daciasdesire

    daciasdesire Really Experienced

    Yes Zingiber! This is such a fun setting for what I hope will be lots of crazy shanagians. I know I still have a tonne of different ideas.
     
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