I've been writing this story for about a month now, focusing on an episodic structure because my last story became very unwieldy once it was ~50 chapters deep. https://chyoa.com/story/Undercover-Agent.55263 Looking for any kind of feedback on writing style, suggestions for scenarios, how I can improve my writing. Thanks!
I like how you write actions and physical descriptions. I don't have trouble at all following what is happening. I noticed, though, that there aren't really any details about how she is feeling. Like, is she nervous or scared orexcited or confident? I think that it would add a lot more reader engagement if you added more emotionality into your writing. At least for me It's a great story though! Super fun. -Seph
Thanks for the feedback! I agree I'm not consistent at describing her emotions, I'll work on improving that.
After five chapters, I'm feeling decently good with how it has gone. The story and characters have surprised me - I definitely didn't see it going where it went, but sometimes it seems they're telling me what to do instead of the reverse. That's the best part about writing, I suppose!
