Vanguard of the Invasion

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by newbie80, Jan 24, 2015.

  1. newbie80

    newbie80 Virgin

    Hi all,

    I have a story here migrated from the old Chyoo, keen to see it take off. It's alien tech, mind control, tentacles - everything a perverted boy/girl needs :)

    Anyway let me know what you think and feel free to add!

    Newbie
     
    newbie80, Jan 24, 2015
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  2. Zingiber

    Zingiber Really Really Experienced

    Zingiber, Jan 25, 2015
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  3. newbie80

    newbie80 Virgin

    Thanks Zingiber!
     
    newbie80, Jan 25, 2015
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