At some point I’ll probably create my own story on here, but I thought it best to practice by adding branches to others’ stories. My writing has focused on themes such as free use, alternate universes/reality-warping, mind control, and gullibility/naivety. So far I've added 26 chapters to 5 different stories, and I think they've been reasonably well-received but I'd like some advice on where I might need to improve. My branch in The Rulebook: https://chyoa.com/chapter/Men-cannot-control-their-sexual-urges.435205 My branch in Rings of Confirmation: https://chyoa.com/chapter/A-feminist-teacher-has-both-rings.433090 My branch in Items of Power: https://chyoa.com/chapter/Yes.418767 My branch in Changing the Rules: https://chyoa.com/chapter/On-the-street.418419 (only one chapter of mine so far) And I have added several branches to The Definition of Naive: https://chyoa.com/chapter/Throw-Alex-a-bone.389279 (this has the most chapters of all my branches) https://chyoa.com/chapter/Meets-a-random-woman.395669 (only one chapter so far) https://chyoa.com/chapter/No-Pants-Train-Ride-Day.407088 https://chyoa.com/chapter/Randy,-an-18yo-guy-discovering-his-repressed-sexuality.411991 (only one chapter so far) https://chyoa.com/chapter/Abby,-nude-beach-girl-(LEVEL-1).417839 What do you like or dislike about these chapters/branches? What have I done well and what could I have done better? Which characters are the best or worst written? I have an unfortunate habit of starting branches and not getting around to continuing them. Which of these branches would you like to see continued?
