Weather Advisory

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Sleepy7, Jan 27, 2021.

  1. Sleepy7

    Sleepy7 Virgin

    https://chyoa.com/story/Weather-Advisory.25396

    -Hey all-

    I've created a few stories over the past couple of years, deleted a couple of stories, and was hoping for some feedback on this one. "Weather Advisory" By far, this story has the most choices for the reader. I tend to write a lot of voyeur and teasing into my stories.

    As of January 2021 I hit the 70k mark. I seem to be getting a lot of views, but not a lot of likes. I have included sporadic updates at the bottom of some chapters reminding folks to "like" to encourage me to continue. Sometimes it feels like begging.

    I also don't seem to be able to keep up with other trending stories...

    Any and all feedback on the story and writing is welcomed!

    thanks,

    Sleepy7
     
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  2. Kineticat

    Kineticat Really Really Experienced

    I've noticed a lot of folks like to read but are a bit stingy on the likes. I'm not sure the non-writers here get just how much motivation a writer can get from the positive re-enforcement. I wouldn't let it bother you, the view and favorite counts show a lot of people are really interested in your story! :)
     
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  3. Sleepy7

    Sleepy7 Virgin

    Yes indeed, the "like" button is the stimulus/response that can keep one going or make you question whether to just scrap it.

    THANK YOU for your feedback!
     
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  4. Kineticat

    Kineticat Really Really Experienced

    No problem. I know the feeling!

    I write away and I think just two people really bother to offer feedback. It's a thankless thing at times but I enjoy doing it. Why go to the trouble of writing and not post it, right? Damn the readers own me, don't they? lol!
     
  5. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    I was a long time lurker here, and i never liked anything.


    You gain more empathy once you become a writer, but when you are just a consumer it doesn't even cross your mind how much a like can mean to the writer. Hell i used to scoff at Facebook likes, thinking of them as pointless nonsense. And in a way
    i still believe that. Yeah, it's nice to get likes, but it's very easy to get obsessed with them, especially when you publish a chapter you are particularly proud of.

    I have to admit i was sorely tempted to try the old "Give five lieks or i won't continue this you fuckers!" at least once. But that is not a healthy mindset to have.
     
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  6. Sleepy7

    Sleepy7 Virgin

    I agree, with that. Kinetcat brought up the point of looking at views, not "likes."

    Thank you two for the sage advice!

    -Sleepy7
     
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  7. Kineticat

    Kineticat Really Really Experienced

    Favorites are probably a better metric than views. If I look at my story 5 times that counts as 5 views. Sometimes it’ll give you a bit of an idea of traffic to the story though :)
     
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