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Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by CrocodileHAZARD, May 23, 2018.

  1. A fanfic story for Teen Titans.

    Click here for story.

    Honestly, I mostly just put it together as an alternative to Clash of the teen titans by vic_elor. My only real gripe with the story was how it focused on only one possible protagonist. Seemed pretty limiting at points, and I honestly didn't care much for the character made. Figured I'd basically "recreate" the idea but add the potential for writers to add their own kinds of characters to the mix: heroes/villains/anti, with any kind of power that adders would want to see.
     
  2. zediekiel

    zediekiel Virgin

    I found it a compelling enough prompt to use it as a low-stress writing exercise while I polish up my disused writing skills. Still need to work on the pacing more.