Witch's Curse (Game) - Discussion

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Fiftyfiftyfifty, Dec 28, 2016.

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    Hello, CHYOA. I know I submitted this story awhile back, but this piece of writing means a lot to me! It was my first time experimenting with variables/conditions/etc. That's what it started as anyway, but it eventually developed into a huge project with all sorts of branches and hidden choice effects that come into play much later. You play a man in a modern world, though that world has magical spells and fantasy races. You're unfortunately cursed and challenged by a witch to resist orgasming for one week. Can you last?

    Click here to read Witch's Curse.

    I've received comments, but I was just curious as to what other people thought. I had a lot of fun writing this one. Don't worry. I will update it again. It just takes a lot of work figuring out all the branches and conditions.

    Psst. I've also been experimenting with a Tumblr page.
     
  2. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    My first comment, right off the bat, is: CHANGE THE DEFAULT NAME!!! Leaving the protagonists name as just "Jhon Doe" is lazy and really detracts from the story.

    Second, it's a fun little story, but the non-con aspect of it turns me right the hell off...