Hello everyone, I hope to get some feedback and discussion on my story "WorldMaster™". https://chyoa.com/story/WorldMaster™.12290 Also looking for ideas, input, criticisms, etc. At the moment I plan to expand a bit on the current chain and maybe branch to some celebs at some point. Thanks in advance, B.
I'm always on the lookout for good reality-altering stories, and I like the setup of this one enough that I'm in the process of writing at least one chapter, with less sex and more exploring the functionality of the watch. (It'll be a different branch from earlier in the chain than the point you've written to.) I think we may end up having slightly different ideas of how the watch works and whatnot, but we can always claim it's because the watch is in beta testing. In fact, I may add that to the chapter I'm writing...
Thank you for the nice addition to my story. Hopefully you continue. Love how you altered Jas's appearance.
to be honest, I'm not a big fan of "Freeuse" type of stories, where a guy just walks up to a girl, has sex with her, and it's all perfectly normal. I prefer the girl having to have sex with the guy but not sure what's going on or why she's doing it.
