You are a Pseudo-Demon

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by NiceDaemon, Sep 24, 2019.

  1. NiceDaemon

    NiceDaemon Virgin

    Hello there! I have recently created my first story called "You are a Pseudo-Demon" and i was planning on writing lots of chapters on my own and letting other users make theirs, however i got to a problem, i do not speak english as a native language, and although the first chapter went well, my second one was very crude...

    So, i made this thread so i can ask some things:

    -Is someone willing to help me pass over my crude text and making it "clean"?
    -Can someone please write other chapters in my story? I already cant write chapters well much less do multiple paths alone
    -Would people like if i made another story like this but instead of being a demon you are another creature with a different objetive?


    Im sorry if this is too much to ask for