Your very own Fairy Tail

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Omni-kid, Mar 31, 2018.

  1. Omni-kid

    Omni-kid Virgin

    Hey Guys, my name is Omni-kid and I'm the author of "Your very own Fairy Tail" a Chyoa set in the universe of the anime/manga series "Fairy Tail" that is centered around a main character just about to set out on an adventure armed only with his magic to try and make his way in the world.

    Those who have read my story know that I'm VERY inconsistent in my updates, and at this point, I've kind of given up on changing that. I've created this thread in hopes of receiving feedback and inspiration on where to go with the story and what to include in the future.

    So, tell me what you think and if you like what you see, then come back in like a year when I write the next chapter...
     
  2. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    Here's a free tip, provide a link to your story when you post something like this.
     
  3. jakelyon

    jakelyon Guest

    It's a good start. As you point out it is unfinished, and you have a huge number of options so it needs many threads to flesh it out. I can't tell if you are looking for porn, or a roleplaying story with some sex in it.
     
  4. Omni-kid

    Omni-kid Virgin

    Oops, I should've thought of that, huh? (here you go: https://chyoa.com/story/Your-very-own-Fairy-Tail.9284)

    Also is there a way to hotlink on here?

    I guess it's more of the second at this point, though that's mostly because of the open structure of my story, rather than the original plan (If there ever was one to begin with)