I have a new story called Youth Centre Fuck Club, (story can be found here: https://chyoa.com/story/Youth-Centre-Fuck-Club.10244) and I was hoping for some feedback. I'm trying to work on my writing style so I want some feedback on that. Do I describe enough stuff, or is it all too vague? Should I describe people's looks or places more, or should I describe the sex more? Also, I wanted to know what you guys think is hot/not so hot about my stories. And as always, for other writers out there, please add stuff! I want my stories to grow huge, because I have lots of other ideas I could start writing. Some help would be much appreciated! Thanks in advance
i've been keeping tabs on this story and have enjoyed your work. as someone who likes the cheating/wager type story lines, liked the setup. i would like to contribute and saw you added all new storylines for x-mas and new years that can be built upon
Thanks a lot man, I'm glad you're enjoying it. Feel free to add wherever you like. I love it when people add to the story, that makes it very interesting for me too.
