I actually want negative feedback. I want critique. I don't need my ego stroked. I do want to know though if I wrote anything that you didn't like.
Have you submitted your story to Marcie & Gina Read CHYOA? It's like Destroy Dick December, except for your attempts at fiction. https://forum.chyoa.com/threads/marcie-and-gina-read-chyoa.3327/
I would but it's not long enough to qualify. I have written several chapters but right now, it has more width than depth.
Fair. Maybe work on the longest branch for a bit, then? As it is, the story seems kind of scattershot; some of the chapters are quite short, while others show more interest and are longer.
