https://chyoa.com/story/A-Family-Time.13586 Basically looking for some ideas for the direction this story is going or if you would like to help me co-write it.
You have a lot of content so far, one thing that puts me off though, is the inability to choose a character. I'm not a massive fan of incest either but I'd happily help you in any way I could / if you wanted?
May I suggest you go back through every page and add more specific tags on each page? The tags are what the search function picks up and while there's a few, you'd be more likely to find like-minded people if they are looking inside the chapter. Also, maybe consider some rejection in the various chapters for variety.
The main character shouldn’t just be successful. A little teasing and playful banter both adds some intrigue and opens the door for other angles that people may take on. If your threads are all “here is a character, he fucks her, he fucks her more”, etc, then nothing can be added absent just making up a character. Build a setting (a family reunion - a park, a cruise, a party) and then people can make up their own tales from there.
I see what your saying. I do have outright rejection at 2 points in the story. Early on with the cousin and once depending your choices with your aunt in a sauna later on. I use them to break up the "main character will always get laid no matter what" phenomenon im most stories as well as create splits in the story. I will try to include more without making things to hectic but its a lot of work as I do have to write several story versions in parallel.
