I wanted to start a thread so that I could ask some questions about what they prefer in the story if you haven't read it yet find it here. And also just receive general feedback from people. https://chyoa.com/story/Family-Harem.11805 1. Who would you like to see a line from next? 2.Is it better to release chapters as I write them or in chunks? I will ask more questions in the future but these are the two main one's at the moment Jack.Smith
As this story is incest, I'm not going to read it: BUT, I can give you advice about this at least: Release the content in blocks, so that with each update you end on a sex-scene or the end of a storyline: it's best not to leave your readers with blue-balls...
I'd rather recommend publishing not more than one chapter at once to be more visible on the front page. If you also want to consider Nemo's advice, you could write a couple of chapters until you reach a non-cliffhanger. Then you could publish a chapter every few hours or a chapter per day. When I read a story, I actually don't mind to stop in the middle of a sex scene or at a cliffhanger. And... cliffhangers are there for a reason... they make sure that the viewer will come back for the continuation to satisfy his curiosity. The reader could also fantasize about how the story goes on while waiting for the actual continuation.
You need less you and your's in that story as it starts sounding more like an aweful transcript of a play than a story set in second person. Also harems are painfully overdone, just saying. They avoid interplay between characters and keeps the story boringly simple, why does a character only have to have sex with the mc? Lastly why exclude grandma lol. Half serious, there's a lot of mature porn out there.
