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Hi, fellow writers,
Based on a true(ish) story. Based on my wife's friend. - hope one day to make it into a novel (less erotic than this) But this is the 'adult' version to have a bit of fun with. She was an immigrant from the middle east who had her 'awakening' to the Western way of love during her stay for her further studies.
1) I welcome your thoughts on my new story. It's 5 chapters deep so far with number six due in a few days. I think it's a tad different than most here, there's a sense of humor with quirky characters and an ethnic lead. Anyway, less of what I think I'm here for your thoughts, Please let me know what you think.
2) If you're interested in contributing, please join in. All additions welcome - Afterall, it's a public story.
Story
https://chyoa.com/story/Curiosity-Killed-The-Cat.18072
Based on a true(ish) story. Based on my wife's friend. - hope one day to make it into a novel (less erotic than this) But this is the 'adult' version to have a bit of fun with. She was an immigrant from the middle east who had her 'awakening' to the Western way of love during her stay for her further studies.
1) I welcome your thoughts on my new story. It's 5 chapters deep so far with number six due in a few days. I think it's a tad different than most here, there's a sense of humor with quirky characters and an ethnic lead. Anyway, less of what I think I'm here for your thoughts, Please let me know what you think.
2) If you're interested in contributing, please join in. All additions welcome - Afterall, it's a public story.
Story
https://chyoa.com/story/Curiosity-Killed-The-Cat.18072