The Book of Corruption

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by the_high_king, Nov 11, 2018.

  1. the_high_king

    the_high_king Virgin

    So, started a new story today. You can check it out here.

    Unlike a lot of CHYOA stories, the idea behind this one is to write these completely innocent, non-sexual, boring tales about a few women. They have a boring beginning and they have a boring ending. Each choice leads to another mundane choice. The twist here however is that writers freely try to "ruin" the story by adding in sexualized chapters and that will become canonical to that story. Why is it canonical? Because I will make active attempts to add chapters that may, (or may not) steer the story towards something non-sexual again, adding them to chapters that others have written. That said, if other writer's put in something non-sexual and mundane as a chapter, I will attempt to corrupt that story in the next chapter. Thus, creating like a see-saw, give-and-take type of chapter writing. I feel like it needs to be said though: not asking for handout chapters here, I will be participating actively.

    Anyway, the TL;DR of this is: I'm making a completely innocent, non-sexual story. Feel free to come and corrupt it ;)
     
    Last edited: Nov 15, 2018
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  2. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    You might want to have an explanation chapter for how that works, because not everyone reads the forums.
     
  3. the_high_king

    the_high_king Virgin

    Good point. I was hoping it would be more self-explanatory in the synopsis but it may need more.
     
  4. dingsdongs

    dingsdongs Really Really Experienced

    Something new and different that encourages collaboration. Good idea. :)
     
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  5. the_high_king

    the_high_king Virgin

    Thanks!
     
  6. the_high_king

    the_high_king Virgin

    Hmm... having trouble drawing more interest into my story. Any suggestions? :/
     
  7. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    I'm not very successful at getting participation myself, but maybe try doing a swap? "I'll write a chapter for your story if you write a chapter for mine" kinda thing.
     
  8. Fierbali111

    Fierbali111 Experienced

    Added one to see how it goes.
     
  9. dingsdongs

    dingsdongs Really Really Experienced

    Considering that you write chapters, where nothing interesting happens, on purpose, this shouldn't come as a huge surprise ;-)
     
  10. the_high_king

    the_high_king Virgin

    Yeah, that's true. I suppose I made something that's going to be hard to get into without incentive to do so :p

    Well, I've updated the 'Author's Notes' now. Hoping my new update will attract more willing writers.

    @Fierbali111 Thanks for your addition btw!
     
  11. Split_Agony

    Split_Agony Virgin

    Hey, I participated until a certain someone declared surrender and quit
     
  12. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    Links, links would be good.
     
  13. Split_Agony

    Split_Agony Virgin

  14. Nemo of Utopia

    Nemo of Utopia CHYOA Guru

    Too much non-con for me, But I wish you luck.